First Draft Revisions

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Unlock the Power of Revision at Our Virtual Writing Retreat

Join me for a transformative, three-day Virtual Writing Retreat designed to elevate your manuscript through the art of revision. Whether you're a seasoned writer or just starting your journey, understanding the revision process is essential for crafting a compelling, polished story.

Why Revision Matters: Revision is more than just fixing errors—it's the key to unlocking your manuscript's full potential.

Through thoughtful revision, you can refine your narrative, deepen your characters, and enhance your prose.

It's where good writing becomes great writing.

Your writing coach,

Lynn Palermo

What You'll Gain

Your Path to a Stronger Manuscript Starts Here:

Join us and take the first step toward transforming

your manuscript into a captivating, polished work of art.

Embrace the power of revision—because revision is writing.

Clarity & Focus

Learn to identify and amplify the strengths of your manuscript while addressing its weaknesses.

Language Enhancement

Polish your prose, improve your clarity, and infuse your writing with vivid meaningful descriptions.

Structural Mastery

Gain insights into refining your plot, pacing, and narrative structure for a seamless storytelling experience.

Editing Techniques

Discover practical strategies and tools for effective self-revision and peer feedback.

Character Depth

Develop authentic, multidimensional characters and create engaging dialogues that resonate with readers.

Revision Plan

Walk away with a plan that won't leave you feeling overwhelmed.

Resources Included

Editorial Plot Map:

A visual tool to map out the plot and identify key events and turning points.
Helps visualize the overall structure and pacing of the story.

Character Arc Map:

A template to track character development and consistency throughout the story.
Ensures characters have clear, compelling arcs.

Manuscript Checklist:

A comprehensive checklist covering plot, character, dialogue, setting, conflict, and more.
Aids in thorough evaluation of the manuscript.

Revision Plan Template:

A structured template for creating a personalized revision plan.
Includes sections for setting goals, prioritizing tasks, and scheduling milestones.

This detailed structure ensures that participants engage deeply with their manuscripts, receive valuable feedback, and leave with a clear plan for revision.

Tuesday Oct 1st - Plot and Character Overview

Day 1: Foundations of Revision

Focus: Participants will perform a self-assessment of their own manuscript using provided worksheets. This exercise will help students identify strengths and weaknesses in their work.

Session 1: Student participants will take a deep dive into their plot's structure, strengths and weaknesses.

ET: 12:00 PM - 2:00 PM

PT: 9:00 AM - 11:00 AM

Session 2: Participants will track the development of their main characters throughout the story, assessing character consistency, growth, and dynamics.

ET: 4:00 PM - 6:00 PM

PT: 1:00 PM - 3:00 PM

Wednesday Oct 2nd - Structural Refinement and Compelling Characters

Day 2 - Structural Refinement and Compelling Characters

Focus: Analysis of a 10-20 page cross-section of your manuscript

Session 1: Focus on scenes, pacing and tension.

ET: 12:00 PM - 2:00 PM

PT: 9:00 AM - 11:00 AM

Session 2: Compelling characters and dialogue and voice.

ET: 4:00 PM - 6:00 PM

PT: 1:00 PM - 3:00 PM

Thursday Oct 3rd - Language and Prose Polish

Day 3 - Language and Style Enhancement and Editing Techniques

Focus: Polishing Prose

Session 1: Enhancing clarity, meaning, flow and descriptive language.

ET: 12:00 PM - 2:00 PM

PT: 9:00 AM - 11:00 AM

Session 2: Practical editing strategies, demonstration of editing software and resources

ET: 4:00 PM - 6:00 PM

PT: 1:00 PM - 3:00 PM

Pricing Plans

Basic

$300

Access to all live sessions
Excel Editorial and Character Map Workbook and Resources
Access to recorded sessions for 30 days

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Premium

$500

Everything in the Basic Package
One 30-minute one-on-one coaching session (great for character arc, plot or scene reviews)
Detailed feedback on a 5-page writing sample (Post Retreat)

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VIP

$850

Everything in the Premium Package
Two additional 30-minute one-on-one coaching sessions.(3 Total)
An in-depth developmental review on a 55,000 word manuscript (post retreat) Contact Lynn if your manuscript is longer for adjusted price

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Have we met yet?

Hey, I'm Lynn,

Go-to writing and accountability coach for family historians ready to shape their research into shareable stories.

A decade and a half ago, I embarked on an extraordinary journey. Fueled by the desire to transform my painstaking research into compelling narratives for my family, I sought to weave stories that would transcend time and resonate with future generations. The fear of my carefully compiled files and keepsakes being lost in the sands of time propelled me to create a lasting legacy.

I started with my first masterpiece - a timeless heirloom coffee-table book. It was met with resounding success, sparking curiosity and admiration amongst its readers. Consequently, I found myself amidst a throng of eager students, all yearning to unravel the secrets behind my craft.

Over the past decade, I've been a beacon of knowledge and inspiration for thousands of students worldwide, teaching them the art of family history writing. My repertoire has expanded over the years, reflecting my versatility as a writer.

I've crafted a captivating family history children's book
Penned a novella-length family history narrative
Authored numerous evocative short stories and ancestor profiles
Currently, I am weaving a novel-length family history narrative

Now, it's your turn to embark on this enchanting journey. With my proven methods, comprehensive worksheets, and versatile templates, I am here to guide you every step of the way. Let's together unfurl the pages of your family's unique history and share it with the world.

Looking forward to seeing you inside The Studio.

Lynn

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